OK, time for the commentators to help

What we need here is a discussion about punctuation in poetry, or what should I do with the Enjo Poem?

I think the spacing defines the rhythm, and punctuation will be redundant here. But that is my own masterly artistic self, and there may be other thoughts in the world.

What say ye?

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But sometimes what you write is neither polished nor useful. Then it arrives here. With lots of sentence fragments and beginning ideas. If you wish, please comment on what you find. If you don't like the politics, don't comment. Here, we deal with the writing.
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2 Responses to OK, time for the commentators to help

  1. sandoe says:

    this is decent. bruner.bmissouri.com

  2. Very amazing site! I wish I could do something as nice as you did…mary

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