Wednesday, February 18, 2015
Or even sex … …
Oh, Nina, really
It’s not about the shape of your face
the width of your hips, the heat of your tits
even the color of your blondness
fades as we admire the depth
of your wit, the mind in your words
the song of your heart soars,
snogging forever that memory
of your work and elocution
among the wounded.
Thursday, March 14, 2013
Little Rhymes for Christof the Spoken Poet
Like Eliot, we are putting on a face
to meet the faces that we meet)
In the crowd a pleasant smiling softness
show faces changing feelings
wearing what we cannot hide
hiding what our smile never shows
feeling changes chasing wishes
Hiding among the bullies
and then desire — just a secret shock…
today reading Millay
and Berryman, of course and Wang Wei.
these three explode together
these three combine so fine-ly
a green and bluish muse, my baby oh yes
we need inspiration,
a quiet Chinese forest,
anxious american words
screeds against the ennui
shall i create a shambling devil pulling my soul
or yet describe — that night in jail
i could not believe how much stupidity existed
i sucked another nail –
Homer found Ulysses and also rhythm
what or who will i find in the seeking of a dragon
my muse in the future –
ha ha, i shall implore my soul
in missives to the dragon, follow my lead here
describe the perfect description in musical words
Tuesday, October 27, 2009
Summers eve upon the plain
a languid silky shadowed sky,
lazy dusky sunshine warm
a prairie day declining lightly
wistful breezes weaving grasses
shadow clouds of summer storms
like birds upon a zephyr
grasping soothing wafting fingers
slide like waving grasses
among this breathless touching
softly woven desire
floats on drifting air……..
Thursday, October 15, 2009
Writing is albums of the heart,
we sigh – try to fly to birth this life
to share perhaps, our dreams.
Places find you in your wonder,
the air is ripe, plucking ears
like a blues harp in a smoky joint
singing in a many flowered voice.
waking the artist between refrains,
warm this strummin’ heart and sing
the sun and moon into our world
Her fiddle bowed
parts untamed sounds
and shapes the voice of air
quiet arrays, supporting chords
backups smile the music sweetly.
thumping, drumming, pounding sounds
pump our blood outright
bouncing counterpoint beats in style
lyrics find flirting hearts,
Spirits dancing air
prancing under sweet
cool lacquered strokes
from a breathless alto angel.
From uniform to pulp
Battlefield to workshop
Warrior to artist
Combat Paper Project
Tuesday, September 29, 2009
On twitter you might want to read @Longshiren, where I am posting very short images that seem pretty and poetic. Another experiment.
One of the reasons for creating this blog is to show some of the things we go through to take an idea from basic words to a finished poem.
Usually, the rough drafts, as shown below, are filled with the language as it originally expressed the idea. Sometimes this language really overflows and fills everything up, and covers or drowns the original thought.
Sometimes, we just cannot get past the beautiful words, phrases, images, little songlike patterns, and lovely laughing clauses. When we get so caught up in this the poem gets lost but the language is lovely, and that often makes for poor poetry, but really nice sounding daydreams.
We have found that the best way to pare the lines down to the core is to have the family dragon burn all the fluff away. We can then rebuild from that to make a clearer, if somewhat more astringent creation, dedicating the rebuilt phrases to the spare but now well defined poem.
If you don’t have a family dragon, well, you must find some other metaphor, then.
WELL, WE’RE AT WAR AGAIN
Sand and bombs and ugly little
desert spiders and a rancid smell
death on the street or fear in the locals?
Sitting in the waiting room at the VA hospital
spinning the new wheelchair smells like a new car
no spiders here no locals and maybe no bombs
but we still watch with the good eye
Talking to the new wounded and comparing
wheels like high school kids.
Wednesday, August 12, 2009
Well, this is rough, but we are editing and writing more daily. The problem is that we write a million words, and then we excise 999,990 to make it say everything in perfection and simplicity, forgetting that we remember every word, but the readers never saw them. Forgive my audacity, and bear with me. This next few posts should include work on some of the original posts, and perhaps the city poem for Manila. Enjoy, and feedback, please.
A horse is a thing to love,
to touch for the hope of feeling the coat
gather as the muscles quiver in the lightning
emotion of being close.
Love is found in a horse’s eyes,
deeper than pools of endless ink
soft with the light of trust and affection
she demands your direction —
for survival, but gives, without counting
All her breath and warmth of sighs for you
— rolling her shoulders smoothing your saddle
waving the mane for healing your soul
carrying the heat, the playful touches
a weathered caress and more
you must give your share and find
love for your friend as sweet
as a mares own toss of her mane
at the yearling — and you.
Thursday, July 30, 2009
It’s time for new Metaphors
The world is lately filled with conflict,
Wars where terrorists are Muslim,
Christian, Arab, Jew, perhaps Knights
Freedom Fighters, Defenders of faith.
And, everyone’s god is on their side.
staring at the deep blue sky of history
searching for patterns without killing
mercy without bleeding children,
neighbors without anger, hatred……….
Watching the Bowerbirds find roses
daily, daily, finding roses, colored flowers
endlessly engineering togetherness
for their endless loving nests.
Carry a rose to your beloved.
Wednesday, July 22, 2009
The Women In the Hotel in X’ian (first draft)
Gluttony and lust equal BEST SINS EVER!
One night at the hotel in Xi’an
are 12 Americans all men
And no one else in the city
hails from foreign hells
And at least a thousand prostitutes
line the hallways and they stand
outside the doors……..
they will not let them in, they vow,
……..refrains like Sam-I-am fill hotel hall
……..Oh,………I should not toss her joss at all.
……..I will not have my wang in Yang,
……..I cannot slip my dong in Wong,
……..I dare not do her there or here
…………….My wife will learn, I know I fear,
…………………….I can‘t get sucked in my own room
Alas, And also Aids is in the Air, Oh Doom!!
But the evening slows, and in the setting sun,
……..the rush is on to the ATM………